"The 'Scream' School Of Parenting" is about a girl named Naomi who doesn't have much confidence in herself.
The setting of the story takes place on her birthday, where Naomi will be turning 16. But her parents are so caught up at work that they aren't able to celebrate her birthday. At the same time her neighbours-who went to the scream school of parenting- are to busy yelling at their 3 kids because their to lazy to stop their behavior. So while they are drinking, smoking and exchanging loud comments and jokes Naomi will have to sped her 16Th birthday alone.
I thought that the story was going well until it made no sense when they started involving the neighbours. I also thought there was very well description used to tell what was happening in the story, and the humor was also amusing. So all and all the story still got a thumbs up from me.
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Tuesday, November 25, 2008
Summary:"The 'Scream' School Of Parenting"
Posted by ♥Alisha online♥ at 4:15 PM
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Alisha, good summary, but can you tell me why you didn't like the interventions of the neighbours? Anytime you can explain in more detail with examples the better the response. Keep working on it.
What is the name of the song on your widget?
try to explain why it made no sense whjen the neighbours came
in the begining you started really confident but when you went further into your responce it really didn't make sense at all. try to make your responce more making sense.
Alisha, there is one spelling mistake I notices, you typed in sped instead on speed, i don't know if you wanted to say sped but it would make more understandible if you said speed. I think you should have added what they where doing that made them so busy at work. As you'r responce gradualy went on there was less and less description.
How did the story make no sense when they started involving the neighbours when you said that there was very good description?
If you added all that in Alisha, you would get a much better mark.
Good luck. ^_^
hey Alisha,
I thought your response was good but you could have explained why it didnt make sense.
Your summary was also good but you could have added more events that happened in the story.
i think that u kinda did this without much thought. put more scentence variations and big words.
overall i likes your comment
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your response was good but i think that you should have made it make more sense to grade 7 students
Hey alisha that was really good description and I understand what you mean that it was confusing when the neighbours came in because I have read this story but I do think you should have explained this a little bit more. And you should have described what the scream school of parenting was but over all this was a good summary and reasponce.:D
Good summary but try explaining more about the neighbors.
i loved your summery and response!! but there was one and only one spelling mistake. otherwise it was very good!
This is great it tells a lot of details and this book sounds good. I am going to have to read it soon. Also krazy response and summary
Good summary but you need to tell more about the neighbors but that doesn't mean it was bad. Keep it up.
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